Film Trailer Second Draft Audience Feedback

Following the previous post of the second draft of our film trailer, I showed people that fell into the category of my target audience to receive their feedback and find improvements that could be made.

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Below are the main improvements that were suggested through the questionnaire:

Pros

+ Much better than the first draft

+ Good editing speed

+ Good use of music

+ Plot makes more sense than before

+ Good use of props

+ Good creation of puzzles and mystery

+ Good ending shots

+ Follows conventions of a film trailer with BBFC certification and billing block

Cons

- May need more action

- Some shots are too long

- Make trailer even more quick and snappy

- Some shots are out of place

- Some conversations aren't loud enough

- Music cuts off at the end

- Conversation with protagonist and protagonist's wife may not make sense

- Remove some black cuts

- Needs more text transitions

- Maybe make sound overlay other shots