Firstly, I added more additional cover lines to the magazine cover as that was a common piece of feedback I received. I did this as the magazine cover looked to plain and there was a lot of free and empty space left on the magazine cover. I researched the upcoming action and thriller films being released this year and decided to include them in the cover lines.
I also changed the main image of of the poster as the other image was hard to position centrally. The image used in the second draft left space in the middle of the poster and didn't allow for any additional cover lines to be placed around the side of the magazine cover, so I decided to use another mid-shot/long-shot photo of the main protagonist of our film still holding a gun, but this time closer to his body so that I was able to include more cover lines.
Finally, I re-worded the cover line as it now has more of an attraction and shows of more of the cast of the film, which is the unique selling point of the film. The actors, Ansel Elgort and Jesse Eisenberg, as well as the director, Edgar Wright, have all been highlighted as they are important bits of information. I also used the word "confrontation" to give an insight into what the film is about and who is fighting who.

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